pitching day (003)

I was very worried about pitching today the reason for this as that if  i could get my idea forward i would have been not much in control The reason for this was that if I couldn't get my idea forward I wouldn't  be able to be in control with my overhaul mark for my BA mark So my idea had to start out from my oppression so in the end i decided   to go with the elephant trying to give up  smoking idea because its seemed the most quick and simple thing to doing for a short subject After pitch I was very surprise with the reception of my pitch I made the whole class laugh twice. it was suggested that my tutors to instead of making the the idea in to a 2 minute film  but to make it in to 5  short 20 seconds short. that would be placed in-between every  one else films as like a little tasters. I was very annoyed at this idea at the begin.  However I came around after woulds realising that it be better promotion of the idea.  The only criticism that my tutor mike said that i needed to speak louder and much clearly.